tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post3215486511650188389..comments2023-09-18T08:16:20.418-07:00Comments on MeeAugraphie: Ocean reflectsMarcia (MeeAugraphie)http://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-10878055953712992002007-05-06T07:32:00.000-07:002007-05-06T07:32:00.000-07:00Ackworth Born - I'm glad you liked my first one an...<I>Ackworth Born - I'm glad you liked my first one and I understand what you are saying about the second one. Thank you for commenting/critiquing. I appreciate both.</I>Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-58645258726173754772007-05-06T05:36:00.000-07:002007-05-06T05:36:00.000-07:00I like the first one very much with its concrete i...I like the first one very much with its concrete image and understatement.<BR/><BR/>The second doesn't do anything for me -- it seems prosaic, cliched and too well meaning.Gerald (Ackworth born)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10972748175799683560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-84141096521118320742007-05-03T16:17:00.000-07:002007-05-03T16:17:00.000-07:00Roswila - it is a bit like life isn't it. Thank yo...<I>Roswila - it is a bit like life isn't it. Thank you for commenting.</I>Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-89950553704544079872007-05-02T19:58:00.000-07:002007-05-02T19:58:00.000-07:00Love that first one. A bit like life for us all, ...Love that first one. A bit like life for us all, sometimes...:-)Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-54713977316911699382007-05-02T11:57:00.000-07:002007-05-02T11:57:00.000-07:00Crafty Green Poet - abandonment of any kind, I thi...<I>Crafty Green Poet - abandonment of any kind, I think, is poignant. <BR/><BR/>Unfolding Rose - I'm glad you saw the surprise strength in the ocean's hurling of the driftwood. <BR/><BR/>thank you both for commenting.</I>Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-29790001561918133172007-05-02T08:47:00.000-07:002007-05-02T08:47:00.000-07:00i liked the surprise strength of the ocean's hurli...i liked the surprise strength of the ocean's hurling in contrast to the laziness of the driftwood (obviously the result of some very strong life momentum!) love the second haiku - there is so much in it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-41778749732223307902007-05-02T07:46:00.000-07:002007-05-02T07:46:00.000-07:00there's something very poignant about the image of...there's something very poignant about the image of driftwood abandoned.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-39063445178741656482007-05-01T20:32:00.000-07:002007-05-01T20:32:00.000-07:00This Eclectic Life - I think I've been both, just ...<I>This Eclectic Life - I think I've been both, just thrown out on the beach and still adrift waiting on that crescendo. Thank you for commenting (and the thanks).</I>Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4079147528444425510.post-59763456022114273212007-05-01T17:42:00.000-07:002007-05-01T17:42:00.000-07:00I'm driftwood waiting for a crescendo...Thanks. L...I'm driftwood waiting for a crescendo...<BR/>Thanks. Lovely as always.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com