Dawn
light penetrates blinds
sleep gives way to restless breaths
dream releases hold.
MeeAugraphie
05/07/07
light penetrates blinds
sleep gives way to restless breaths
dream releases hold.
MeeAugraphie
05/07/07
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10 comments:
Oh, those first moments of realization that our sleep is over and a new day begins... restless breaths indeed...
Just lovely, Marcia.
What a beautifully atmospheric photo! I like your phrase 'dream releases hold' - yes that's how it feels waking up!
ahhhhh...just seeing your photo and reading your poem is relaxing...
What a great way to wake up! The photo is dreamlike, too.
I second crafty green poet on 'dream releases hold' - although for me it sometimes feel more like a steely grip! lovely photo and haiku of awakening
Lovely view and "dream releases hold" was very cool.
Marcia,
Well done lady!
I like waking up that way, almost as much as I enjoy falling into dreamland.;-)
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Regina Clare Jane, Crafty Green Poet, Susanlavonne, Sandy, Unfolding Rose, Remiman. Thank you all for commenting on my Haiku. It is so interesting to see which aspect of a poem and photo other poets focus on and how we don't always focus on the same point. I was so excited that I was restless that morning last year and caught that sunrise, I could not believe my luck.
If the dream releases its hold to allow me to witness that beauty, I'd be happy indeed. Lovely haiku and photo.
Patols - It was indeed a beautiful sight, I had no idea I had missed that view most mornings. Thank you for commenting.
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