The Life Guide
His ideas converted
to the written essence of life
felt much like fraud,
but should have made
harshness stand alone
and charity more than
double or nothing.
MeeAugraphie
05/16/07
Oh my, please don't copy my words without permission. Thank you.
19.5.07
The Life Guide
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it takes you to make it more.
~ Bold & Tentative ~ Poetic & Terse ~ Bright & Dull ~
~ Patient & Intolerant ~ Oblivious & Aware ~
~ Understanding & Incomprehension ~
~ Willing & Unwilling ~ Able & Unable ~
~ Living & Hiding ~
2 comments:
Another 'perfect' piece. I would not change a thing. I read it over and over. You really weaved your words into something beautiful. The ending is numbing.
Wow, thank you, Chris. I wasn't sure anyone would "feel" this one as much as I did. It was written in response to a prompt.
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