One Deep Breath's prompt this week is one of my favorites: Architecture.
The link above goes to the listing of those who have written beautiful haiku. Check them out, I will as soon as I stop working. . . sigh. Here's my quick and single attempt:
One Poetic Structure
structure repeated
one plus that which came before
fibs, nature creates
MeeAugraphie
06/05/07
structure repeated
one plus that which came before
fibs, nature creates
MeeAugraphie
06/05/07
No, don't copy my words, please. . . You have so many inside you waiting to come out.
6 comments:
Pure genius Marcia...loved it!
Tammy - glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting today!
Excellent!
Crafty Green Poet - Glad you liked it, too! Thanks for commenting today!
Really like the rhythm of "one plus that which came before." Sometimes in poetry, a line or phrase just wants to be said over and over...this is one.
Megan - I understand about the phrase, I keep repeating it, too. Thank you for commenting today!
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