5.6.07

Haiku - One Poetic Structure

One Deep Breath's prompt this week is one of my favorites: Architecture.

The link above goes to the listing of those who have written beautiful haiku. Check them out, I will as soon as I stop working. . . sigh. Here's my quick and single attempt:

One Poetic Structure

structure repeated
one plus that which came before
fibs, nature creates

MeeAugraphie
06/05/07

No, don't copy my words, please. . . You have so many inside you waiting to come out.

6 comments:

Tammy said...

Pure genius Marcia...loved it!

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Tammy - glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting today!

Crafty Green Poet said...

Excellent!

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Crafty Green Poet - Glad you liked it, too! Thanks for commenting today!

megan said...

Really like the rhythm of "one plus that which came before." Sometimes in poetry, a line or phrase just wants to be said over and over...this is one.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Megan - I understand about the phrase, I keep repeating it, too. Thank you for commenting today!


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